Anna Graham

I gotta, say this is great stuff! You organize your thoughts really well, not rushing through important descriptions. Here are some things I noticed: "Then , not a moment later ...

I know what you all mean about people not understanding your costume. When I was a fly in elementary school, someone thought I was a fairy! Do fairies have multiple ...

*jumps to feet and applauds* I just had to read this out loud to my sister. It was wicked. Wicked awesome. We were rolling. On the floor. --Anna

I like it! Your characters are believable, your dialogue is creative, and you keep the reader interested! Good work! I'm excited to read the rest of it! Just fyi: There's ...

I want to write this poem properly, but none of my words can catch its majesty. What mortal person can recreate a miracle like this? I can’t seem to capture ...

Wow, this was great! You're talking about WW2, right? Your imagery is very effective. I especially like, "I pulled apart the seams and washed the spaces in between, looking for ...

Hello there! I love new ideas, so let's see how yours turns out, eh? (just experimenting with structure here, so please look at it objectively :D ) Cut me with ...

Festival of Garks The next day had always been one of Napodi’s favorite holidays, but somehow all those in the past seemed to pale in comparison to this one. Maybe ...

Anna glares at the bright red puddle of soda in the bottom of her glass, but doesn't ask for a refill. Instead, she glances hesitantly at the door, knowing she ...

I started the DaVinci code, but never finished it for some reason. I do recall enjoying it though. For school I'm reading Great Expectations by Charles Dickens. I love the ...

Very interesting! Two things: Remember to put your commas inside your quotation marks. And, it's kinda strange to me for a boy and a girl to be living with each ...

Hello there! I'm sorry to say I've never read anything of this nature, but I'll try to help with the other things! “Sasuke, we got to get back to your ...

The next day, Napodi and the twins took Will on a tour of the village. At first it didn’t look like much: just a couple dozen cabins and a few ...

I write for the same reason I love making music. In my mind, they go hand in hand. They both come from the same spot: a hole in my heart ...

A gold star. My sentiments exactly. Well done! --Anna